Discussion » Help Me Write A Poem Please

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Posted by swss, 18:23, 4th November 2003:
 
i am looking for someone to help me write a poem about a girl i was going out with its a summary of our relationship i can give you the details and you can do your best all i need is help help cause i aint great at this stuff please please please
Posted by Victor Menendez, 18:24, 4th November 2003:
 
Sounds like a job for SpiderDan to me.
Posted by swss, 18:27, 4th November 2003:
 
hey victor who is spider dan
Posted by Redmaiden, 18:28, 4th November 2003:
 
why did he post this twice? knob cheese
Posted by swss, 18:31, 4th November 2003:
 
sorry second time using a computer didnt know how to log on
Posted by Redmaiden, 18:42, 4th November 2003:
 
well why not try a poetry forum instead of this one
Posted by Victor Menendez, 18:57, 4th November 2003:
 
SpiderDan is the Iamcal Poet Laureat.
Posted by Sul, 18:58, 4th November 2003:
 
SpiderDan says gimme the details
Posted by Sul, 19:17, 4th November 2003:
 
I get one key phrase though: "was going out with".

I thought we were great together
But then you dumped me
I thought we would live together
Where you could hump me

You left me for reasons
I fail to understand
I'm looking for that treason
And why it got me canned

Answer me please sweetheart
Its a small thing to request
For my chest conceals a weak heart
And its a troubled thing to test



Its something to go on