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Posted by Saltation_DUPE1, around April 2006:
 
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[DarkMistress] I'm so goth that when I was a toddler, I didn't cry over spilled milk, I MOURNED it.
[DarkMistress] I'm so goth I have a fishnet umbrella
[open24hours] I'm so goth my wrists slash themselves.




I'm so goth my eyeshadow has eyeshadow
Posted by WarHead, around April 2006:
 
I'm so Goth that I have platform feet.
Posted by Grim..., around April 2006:
 
I'm so Goth, even my piercing's piercings have piercings (I'll let Alfie sort that out).
Posted by Saltation_DUPE1, around April 2006:
 
I'm so Goth I invaded Rome.
Posted by Sul_DUPE1, around April 2006:
 
I'm so Goth I make albinos look tanned.
Posted by Sul_DUPE1, around April 2006:
 
I'm so Goth... oh forget it, nobody cares.
Posted by flick, 4th February 2007:
 
I'm so goth when I wake up dead from a nitemare I'm having a better dream.
Posted by flick, 4th February 2007:
 
I'm so goth my nitemares are afraid of ME.
Posted by Emma, 4th February 2007:
 
"I'm so goth my wrists slash themselves" HAHAHHA

I'm so goth I make Bree Timmons look normal

Posted by fotherington-smythe, 4th February 2007:
 
how many goths does it take to change a lightbulb?

none, because they like to cry and slash themselves in the dark.


see, even us upper class toffs can crack jokes with the best of them!
Posted by scrybl, 5th February 2007:
 
I'm so goth that the Adams family phone me for tips?
Posted by Lucy Record, 5th February 2007:
 
I'm so goth, the other day we bought this big tube, and then Danny and me filled it with bats, and we sealed up the end, and then we got the big tube full of bats and take it around with us.
Posted by Emma, 5th February 2007:
 
hahah Lucy
Posted by Saltation_DUPE1, 13th February 2007:
 
How to write a Gothic Poem:
Steps

1. Start with a topic. This expansive genre encompasses a huge range of topics -- just kidding. Choose either "death" or "pain," anything else isn't truly goth. Anger is okay sometimes, but make sure that your anger involves either death or pain. Rejection is out. You aren't allowed to fall in love in the first place. Note: Feeling really adventurous? Try both at once!
2. Think of a title. Choose either one simple, minimalistic word (i.e. "Anger" or "Darkness") OR an incredibly long, flowing title with at 'least' five syllables. It still has to be abstract, though, and throwing in oxymorons can always help. Think "The First Light of Midnight" or "Exotic Darkness' Hidden Mistress."
3. With the hard part out of the way, outline the poem. Anything goes in this step, as you'll soon revise it. A short example: "my twisted soul can no longer fly//darkness rips at my blinding eyes"
4. Take out all capitalization, especially of the word "I." The only things allowed to be capitalized are references to Death, Pain, Torment, and the names of Greek gods/goddesses (see "Tips").
5. Remove all punctuation that might either improve the flow of the poem or be grammatically correct. Add random ellipses to at least half the lines.
6. Read through your poem. If there's any hint of hope, happiness, etc., cut that section, or change it to something about darkness.
7. The poem cannot rhyme at all. Also, it must contain the words "darkness," "torment," "black," and "soul" at least once. Preferably in the same line: e.g. "The wretched darkness blackens my tormented soul..."
8. Make some random line breaks. This is called "free verse." This step serves many purposes, including making the poem seem longer and making your ideas more abstract. Put as many as you like -- there is no limit. If a line almost actually sounds poetic, slice it in half. Or put the last word on its own line.


Tips

* No "good" gothic poem can get by without a reference to razors. There are two typical ways to look at them: either love them ("i long to feel the touch of the blade once more") or treat them like a drug you want to quit ("if only the blood could stop flowing//i cannot stop this//sweet Escape").
* Reference Persephone (who was kidnapped by Hades and forced to live half of every year in the underworld), Orpheus (a poet who tried to rescue his wife from Hades), Eurydice (the wife of Orpheus), Tantalus (doomed to forever sit in pool of water with grapes hanging overhead but not be able to touch them), the Cimmerii (people who lived in eternal darkness), or other ancient Greek/Roman tragic stories. These make your poem seem almost like real poetry!
* Diction is what can make or break your poem. Use words that sound goth -- ephemeral, vorpal, evanescent, phlegmatic, atramentous, etc. It doesn't even matter if you use them correctly, as long as your audience doesn't know the difference. Also, use the word "rape" generously ("the Darkness rapes my tortured//soul").
* Blood is never red. It can be crimson, cerise -- even erubescent -- but never red. Also, instead of "bloody," try "ensanguined."
* Throw in some random Latin. "Memento mori" (literally, "remember mortality," but commonly used as "remember you must die") is a big hit, as are "nox" (night), "clavicula" (key), and "caligo" (gloom or mental darkness). It doesn't matter if you actually know Latin...just use some random phrases and mock anyone who questions you. Note: Latin can make for some good titles.
* Keep all of your poems in a small, black notebook hidden somewhere in your room. If your notebook isn't black, draw abstract designs on it with a black pen. Don't let your mom see it.
* Have a computer read your poems with a text-to-speech program. There is no match for the ensuing artistic beauty.
* Always write out numbers, but the only numbers you actually need to use in any of your poems would be thirteen and six (six feet under).
Posted by Saltation_DUPE1, 13th February 2007:
 
oo! new word for me! "atramentous". fantastic.

There's a cuttlefish hidden amid
All the ink of that cuttlefish squid:
Atramentous and black,
It deters an attack:
You can't see where that cuttlefish hid.
Posted by WarHead, 13th February 2007:
 
Chrissie Maher (OBE) would argue that you should just say 'inky.'
Posted by Saltation_DUPE1, 13th February 2007:
 
yeah, i just love some of the more recondite words ("anadiplosis i say, young kenobi, hmmm?"), but not at the risk of longeur. brachylogy r me!

for non-playful stuff, i'm heartily with chrissie. she might be pleased to know there's a formal government "Plain English" initiative in oz doing exactly the same but country-wide and mandatory, for all statutes and standard contracts.
Posted by Salman Rushdie_DUPE1, 13th February 2007:
 
The Physical Impossibility of Death in the Mind of Someone Living

I knew a girl,
I loved her bad,
She's left me now,
And so I'm sad.
Posted by Grim..., 13th February 2007:
 
Chrissie Maher (OBE) would argue that you should just say 'inky.'

Eschew obfuscation. Makes sense.
Posted by Saltation_DUPE1, 13th February 2007:
 
i'm so goth i chew obfuscation.
Posted by WarHead, 13th February 2007:
 
Eschew obfuscation.


I do, twenty times for each mouthful.
Posted by Saltation_DUPE1, around 13th February 2007:
 
Eschew

bless you